Influence came from Don Hertzfeldt. An animator who became famous for his legendary animation "Rejected". By simply avoiding difficult set ups such as horizonts or difficult objects. All characters are simple and even express the idea without emotions in some scenes. Since i tried to over do with some ideas i decided to try this and try making something simple and not difficult to understand.
The animatic. The animatic was done with attention to certain points that are supposed to be in the final animation. Since some of the scenes are changed or replaced for something that i saw more fit for the a certain shot.
I fixed a few moments in the final aniamtion during the extension i was given. Worked a bit contrast correction and re-did the timing on some shots. Some shots still look chunky due to me rushing it. In overall this work is better than the one i did 2 years ago. I left the same un-mastered music,cause it already fit nicely and working on it might just bring me unnecessary time waste. The only thing that's bothering me now is that it looks too chunky after post-production.
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